Critical Review of Her Will Be Done


The Critic’s Corner

Her Will Be Done
By: Ron Kozloff
149 pages
Pink Flamingo Publications
P.O. Box 632
Richland, MI 49083

Two months ago I received an email from a new friend that complimented me on my website as well as OUR WAY magazine. As you would expect I love to receive messages like that and after a short flurry of email my new friend, Ron told me that he had written a story. I’m always looking for new material and I encouraged him to tell me more about his story. I soon discovered that it was in print and would shortly be available. I pressed for a copy and received my book of Her Will Be Done last month but too late to be reviewed for the April issue. It also allowed me more time to read leisurely. Guess what, I loved it!

Ron Kozloff is a talented writer and has done a credible job of taking us through the life of Rhonda as Sissy Maid to her Mistress Darian Gray. Rhonda lives in her life with her Mistress being trained as a subservient subject to her and her very close friend, Faith, when she is disciplined in her transformation to femininity. It has been published by Pink Flamingo to be included in the large library of novels all pretty much bounded in the erotica of Female Domination with aspects of BDSM and humiliation. Rhonda is dressed beautifully throughout the novel from the sexy French maid uniform to the delightful schoolgirl outfit of matching prim white blouses, red and white striped ties and dark blue jumpers — she is — but the author’s expertise better defines the activities that take place in Rhonda’s training.

And these are very extensive and beautifully documented. Let me list some chapter headings so that you may have a glimpse into the training, discipline and humiliation that Darian with “Her Will Be Done” takes or puts Rhonda through.

A Sissy Maid
A Serving Wench
Corporal Punishment
The Fetish Funhouse
The Room of Mirrors
A Sissy by any other name
Walk like a girl
A Close Shave
The Schoolgirls
Curtsy like a good girl
Erotic Service
A House Slave
Wet, Inc.

Well, that’s not all and I’m sure you have a good idea of the FemDom erotica you will find here. Frankly I enjoyed them all. Now that’s a revealing statement – although I won’t tell you my best favorite of them all. This gal has to keep a few secrets about her fantasies to herself. But I will tell you this, I now keep this lovely novel by my bedside to read if I wake at night and feel the need for a little stimulation to help put me back to sleep.

Oh now, do you really want to know my secret flight of fancy? I’ll give you a hint, It starts on page 56 — I’ve got it bookmarked now. How about you?

Ms. Bobbi

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Review of A Shameful Devotion

TITLE:            A Shameful Devotion

AUTHOR:      Ron Kozloff

REVIEW:       Pink Flamingo Website Book Reviews

This is the story of a young girl named Andrea and is written as letters from herself to her diary at the request of her mistress, Miss Florence Harwood, of the Harwood Academy.  Andrea has been sent to Miss Florence by her mother for lessons in obedience and deportment.  Under Miss Florence’s strict tutelage and discipline, Andrea quickly learns her place. She even becomes proud of her progress and her newfound obedience to this formidable woman. The story really takes off as Andrea’s boyfriend, Trevor Martin, comes under Miss Florence’s control, as he  quickly becomes her willing slave.

This story contains little of everything, and a lot of humiliation and corporal punishment, as well as forced male homosexuality, and lots of female control. Miss Florence controls every aspect of Andrea’s and Trevor’s lives – including how often they see each other, how much contact they are allowed, even when and how they enjoy sex. Though Florence allows them to marry, her ruthless control continues. Finally, she arranges for Trevor to get Andrea pregnant. Once that is done, her interest in Trevor wanes and she turns him over to a male friend.  Her intent is to take control of Andrea’s baby. But will she get that chance? The high-spirited Andrea has a rebellious streak the Femdom may not have anticipated.

I enjoyed this story for its variety of elements that are common to Femdom erotica, especially its emphasis on humiliation, control and punishment. If you like Femdom, you’re certain to like this story. This is a truly one of a kind story, as intriguing as it is sexual provocative.