Critical Review of Her Will Be Done

 

The Critic’s Corner

Her Will Be Done
By: Ron Kozloff
Paperback
149 pages
Pink Flamingo Publications
P.O. Box 632
Richland, MI 49083

Two months ago I received an email from a new friend that complimented me on my website as well as OUR WAY magazine. As you would expect I love to receive messages like that and after a short flurry of email my new friend, Ron told me that he had written a story. I’m always looking for new material and I encouraged him to tell me more about his story. I soon discovered that it was in print and would shortly be available. I pressed for a copy and received my book of Her Will Be Done last month but too late to be reviewed for the April issue. It also allowed me more time to read leisurely. Guess what, I loved it!

Ron Kozloff is a talented writer and has done a credible job of taking us through the life of Rhonda as Sissy Maid to her Mistress Darian Gray. Rhonda lives in her life with her Mistress being trained as a subservient subject to her and her very close friend, Faith, when she is disciplined in her transformation to femininity. It has been published by Pink Flamingo to be included in the large library of novels all pretty much bounded in the erotica of Female Domination with aspects of BDSM and humiliation. Rhonda is dressed beautifully throughout the novel from the sexy French maid uniform to the delightful schoolgirl outfit of matching prim white blouses, red and white striped ties and dark blue jumpers — she is — but the author’s expertise better defines the activities that take place in Rhonda’s training.

And these are very extensive and beautifully documented. Let me list some chapter headings so that you may have a glimpse into the training, discipline and humiliation that Darian with “Her Will Be Done” takes or puts Rhonda through.

A Sissy Maid
A Serving Wench
Corporal Punishment
The Fetish Funhouse
Threeplay
The Room of Mirrors
A Sissy by any other name
Walk like a girl
A Close Shave
The Schoolgirls
Curtsy like a good girl
Erotic Service
A House Slave
Wet, Inc.

Well, that’s not all and I’m sure you have a good idea of the FemDom erotica you will find here. Frankly I enjoyed them all. Now that’s a revealing statement – although I won’t tell you my best favorite of them all. This gal has to keep a few secrets about her fantasies to herself. But I will tell you this, I now keep this lovely novel by my bedside to read if I wake at night and feel the need for a little stimulation to help put me back to sleep.

Oh now, do you really want to know my secret flight of fancy? I’ll give you a hint, It starts on page 56 — I’ve got it bookmarked now. How about you?

Ms. Bobbi

To order a copy or a catalog of Erotic Fiction, write, email or call:

Pink Flamingo Publications
P.O. Box 632. Richland, MI 49083
(616) 629-0051
catalog@pinkflamingo.com
http://www.pinkflamingo.com

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Web Author: Bobbi Swan
Copyright © 2002 by bswan – ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
Last revised: April 30, 2002

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